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Happily you walked down to the beach,using the secret path through the forest.Today you were visiting your friends at your secret cove,just a fun day of gathering sea shells for (friend 1)'s shop.

You lived in a fishing town so everything it had were sea food shops and beautiful shell shops.Hearing the sound of the ocean you look up to see (F1)and(F2) waiting for you waving,you smiled.

"Hi guys!"

"Hi________"they greeted you"Did you hear what happened last night?"she added


"You know the finfolk?"

"Yes"your village had 5 finmen living in your waters.Finmen were like mermaids but they abducted humans for eternal servitude.But because of them pirates have never raided your village because of the fear of the finmen attacking their boats.

"Well one of them took hercules!"

"Which one?!?"

"I don't know,but they don't really attack in the daytime so we'll be ok"

"Thank goodness"you sighed playing with your silver necklace.

"Oh yeah and Ms.Héderváry wanted drift wood for her art"(f2) reminded you.

"Well lets get started"you say growing impatient of waiting.Not knowing you were being watched by a swedish finman.Walking around the beach you picked up some beautiful shells and put them in you bucket.

Looking down at your silver necklace it had a silver shell pendant that sparkled.After about an hour you thought you and enough things and walked back towards your friends,you filled up the bag with shells.

"Hey _________ me and (F1) are going to the rocks,you should come!"(f2) yelled over to you smiling.The rocks in the cove were easy to climb,and branched off into the ocean.

"I'm coming"you said running into the water not worrying about you clothes.Since no one knew this cove was here you could swim freely.It was a great way to cool off after  walking around in the hot sun for so long,the rocks were cool and calm.

~~~~~~~~~~~Berwald's Pov~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I looked through the water at my new prey,she had (hair length/haircolor) and stunning (eyecolor).Suddenly i saw some thing shiny on her neck,it was a silver necklace.My hands started to shake I wanted her and that necklace,but those other 2 I wanted them gone I hate human contact.

If they were here,they could help her escape me.Staying behind the rocks I used my magic to blend in so they wouldn't see me,then I got an idea.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~Author's talkin now~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

While you were talking with your friends about mindless thing you saw something floating out of your perpheral  vision,looking over you see a large piece of drift wood.

"Hey guys there's a huge piece of drift wood"you say pointing to it

"She did say to get large pieces"(F1)said

"I go get it since nether of you are good swimmers"you say slowly getting into the water,they shrugged.

It started to float away until you grabbed it.Big Mistake.

It suddenly changed in to a finman,adrenaline pumped through your veins,it grabbed you in an iron grip pulling you down.(F1) and (F2) jumped in after you.Trying to pull you from his grip,the village as at least 10 minutes away they would never hear you.Remembering that finmen have a weakness for silver you yanked it off your neck and threw it.

He paused for a minute his body aching to go after it using the time you kicked his scaled leg he released you.Swimming as fast as you could back to sure feeling him right behind you,you reached the rocks right behind (F2).You were almost on the rocks when he grabbed your leg and pulled you back down,hearing (F1) and (F2) scream your name you were dragged under.

You kicked and tryed to pry him off of you,your body started to weaken the need to breath filled your mind.Everything was fuzzy and dark,your lungs aching until you finally passed out.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Berwald's Pov~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

She had finally passed out,but her friends were probably going for help.I had not Idead she was going to be such a fighter,no one had ever gotten out of my grip but her.

Swimming back to my underground cave about 300 ft down and 5 miles off shore which was only about 15 seconds a trip for me.Once she was out I kissed her lightly giving her the ability to breath under water for a short while.Seeing her necklace glistening in the water I swam over,grabbing it quickly joy filled my heart even more.

Using the remainder of my strength I arrived at my cave in about 14 seconds a new record.Coming up into the air pocket I layed her down and climbed out myself.This air pocket was huge with crystals illuminating the cave as if the sun could reach this place,there were some plants that grew food and medicine.

They all noticed my presence and lined up as always,I had  10 human servants unlike Mattias who has 30.

"'ll r'ght th's is m'wife,t'ke her to m'room"I spoke loudly pointing to her unconsious body,they started to shake slightly under my stare.

"Yes sir!"one said picking up her body,I smiled slighty I wouldn't do anything just yet.

"The r'st of you b'ck to wh't you were doing"they all went off in different directions,I grimaced once Matthais learns I have a female he'll come swimming.Since females never really go into the water all my servants were males,the females had grown smart to our tactics.

Our population has been growing extremely weaker,I needed offspring but a finwoman was out of the question.All they cared about were their looks and if theey mated with a finman in seven years they would be a disgusting finhag.

'I-I need a relationship with her first'I thought my head starting to throb at the thought of Matthias or any other finman taking her away.Walking to my room I saw my servants running around gathering food and such,they just cleaned my home.

Walking through my crystal home everything shined beautifully as normal.Passing my silver room I glanced in the mountains of silver I had been hoarding since I was old enough to steal.Smiling I continued down the hall to my room which was the only place there was little light,I saw her sleeping peacfully it made me smile.

Lifting the covers I snuggled close to her,she started to move for a moment I thought she woke up.Only to have her snuggle closer to me,she must have been cold I kissed her forehead.Resting my head on the soft pillow I drifted off peacefully.Hoping she would accept me and that Matthais wouldn't find out she was here.
This will probably turn into a Finman!SwedenxReaderxFinman!Matthias if I continue.....

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BeigeCascade Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is FINtastic !!!!!!!!!

if you get the chance PLEASE write more ...and a love triangle would make an exciting sequel or series!!! 🍫🍓🍓🍓🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍬🍑🍑🍬🍬🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍🍍
BeigeCascade Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Btw I didn't realize there was a part two to this when i read it a while ago......until just now when I rediscovered this story!!! The comment above was long overdue sorry!!!!!!
seffykoepsel Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
more please! me love sweden! he doesn't get as much love as everybody else does.
hellgirl-fan1 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
More please
kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great..! Will you please continue?
memowkitty Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I did~
scv25 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
memowkitty Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Go to my gallery and search for it
kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YEEEAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! :iconyayrussiaplz:
burningpyre Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
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