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Laughing Jack X Reader 7 Minutes in Heaven

You searched for something interesting, something different. Avoiding all sharp and pointy objects. You grasped a rope, a worn one at that. Pulling it out, it stretched about a foot or two. Reaching the end a small bear had the roped tied in a noose around its neck, rainbow colored candies fell from its stomach. Splendor took a purple candy and popped it into his mouth.

"He always gives the best candy ________" Splendor sucked on the hard candy, holding the bear under you arm you unwrapped a lemon piece. A shrill laugh came from behind you as you placed the candy into your mouth. You turned sharply, muscles tense. A lanky your man stood with messy black hair, white and black fur on his shoulder, black a white striped sleeves covered his arms, a pair of dark grey over-alls and long striped socks. His skin was a glossy plastic white, black lips with dark rings around his eyes; he cocked his head to the side hair falling in his face.

"Hehaheheah" he cackled, his eye twitched. You nearly choked on the candy, it sliding back you automatically pushed it back up. His spiraled nose made you stare awkwardly at him. In a puff of black smoking he appeared next to you snatching the bear from your grasp.

"heheHahe" he ripped candy out of the bear and shoved at least 10 pieces of candy into him mouth spitting out wrappers. They all slowly floated down to the floor covered with saliva, in a matter of moments Slenderman flipped out screaming. Splendor gasped at his behavior, pushing you both into the closet.

"Remember to share!" Splendor called from the other side, he gave a gave a questioning cock of the head. A glint of mischief shined in his eyes, a piece of candy rolled in his tongue.

"Can you even talk?" you glared at him through through the darkness, he cackled causing your blood to begin to boil.

"Of course I can!" he laughed.

"Splendor wants me to share and share I shall~" his hands tightly wrapped around your neck pulling you closer. You tightened your lips together as did your jaw. You didn't want this guy to invade what little space you had between you.

"Sto-" as you opened you mouth a slimy tongue slipped in, you went to bite down only to bite a hard candy. It was your favorite flavor too which freaked you out. He pinned you against the wall, his thumbs pressing into the palm of you hands. Your fingers curled and tightened. His tongue and mouth tasted like pure sugar and candy, legs buckling you slumped against him lost in the rainbow of flavors.

"You wanna see a magic trick?!" his eye twitched and he let go of your hands, you tried to put them back to your sides. They wouldn't budge. Your hands were pinned as if nailed to the wall. You jolted forward only to be stopped by some freak force.

"What the hell!?" you screamed only to be silence by candy being shoved into your mouth, you kicked your legs wildly. His hands snaked under your shirt, tickling your soft bellie.  You laughed trying not to choke on the candies, he laughed with you. One thought entered your mind,'This guy gets off on laughter!!" you had a major what the hell moment. His finger trace down your stomach, squeezing you lips shut you surpressed laugher. When people tickled you it got out of control very fast.

"Your laugh sounds cute come on let me hear it" he chuckled, his eyes in the darkness bore into you. Pulling up your legs you blocked your ticklish zone. the candies in your mouth threatened to slip back into your throat.

"So you wanna play hard ball huh?" he let out an insane laugh, someone on the other side yelled " Taser her!". You tried to glare through the door and kill whoever said that. 2 hands pinched your sides, your muffled laughter reverberated the small space. You coughed swallowing the melted candy, your throat ached and burned. A dull burning pain in your legs forced them back down. He lifted your shirt, rolling it up to your breast. A pair of pursed lips pressed against your stomach. He blew directly in the middle of your stomach, the tingling feeling of laughter pulsed through you.

"Ahhahhahah!!" your shrill laugher made him smile, the tingling of being tickled spread down to your nethers. Arms still pulling against the force that bound you against the wall. Every laugh and giggle you grew wetter, your lungs ached, a cramp in your middle.

"Ah..Ha..ow" you groaned the pain becoming to great to continue to laugh. Taking in deep breathes you calmed your shaking body. Laughing Jack stood and eye level with youm jagged tooth smile on his face.

"What a pretty laugh" he whispered poking your stomach a few times, each time your abdomen contracted painfully. Your face is red your breathing heavy and labored.

"________,Jack times up. Don't want you making her laugh herself to death" Jack replaced his hands over your hands in that pressured place, the door creaked open as you were released. Rubbing your palms,everything vanished in a black mist. You fell onto a soft bed, creepy and horrifying clown posters covered the walls. The bed sheets were terrifying having a large clown head with blood dripping from its teeth printed on it.

"Where am I!?" you yelled, Jack appeared kneeling over you.

"I'll give you something else that tastes like candy~" he smirked.
No one guessed this dude! if you would have red his creepypasta you guys would've been all over it.
Hint- snapped neck
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:iconmeisterkiyomi:
meisterkiyomi Featured By Owner 15 hours ago  New Deviant
djkashfsadjfdsjfhuidsgafiskjfhsajihfi  if the D taste liek candy i want it!!    xD
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:iconi-have-no-life-123:
i-have-no-life-123 Featured By Owner 20 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe cake? hahahahahah
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:iconweirdrainbowlemons:
WeirdRainbowLemons Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ha! I love that ending... XD though...
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:iconcreepyspark:
CreepySpark Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015
Fuck yeah!
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:iconwakalover2:
wakalover2 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Student General Artist
:iconoooohplz: LOLLIPOPS- //trips and falls down some stairs
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:icondeadlyrose12345:
deadlyrose12345 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015
Innocence: What else taste like candy?
Me:; -comes in and grabs LJ's ear and drahs him out and gives him a stern talking You ruin her innocents and I will kill you slowly with your own candy. -growls-
LJ: Compesh.
Me:-throws him back into the room- Have fun~! -smiles happily and skips away
InnocEnce:-confused greatly-


Me: Poor sis. -shakes head I am too protective.
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:iconnotokiandothers:
NotokiAndOthers Featured By Owner Edited Jun 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
me: Do you mean a lolipop?
LJ: Sure
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:iconwritingispassion819:
WritingIsPassion819 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Blush Blush Blush Blush Blush Blush Blush Blush Blush Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] 
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:icontreaclecat14:
TreacleCat14 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  New Deviant
LJ: "I'll give you something else that tastes like candy."
Me: "You're kidding? Catnip?!?"
LJ: *Face palm* "No, and you just totally ruined the moment!"
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:iconsnowythewolf1987:
snowythewolf1987 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Snowy: -animatronic wolf ears flicker- CaTnIp?
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
-pops head through the door- CATNIP? -black panther ears privked up, ice blue eyes glowing-
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:iconmoonslayerz:
moonslayerz Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015
someone say catnipCat nods Ohh cat Little Cat  free avatar CCCOOOOOOOLLLLLLLOOOORRRSSSS! Cat fail jump Blair Kitty :animation: 'We're all mad here' Emote Sign cat face 
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
CATNIP?!
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:iconmoonslayerz:
moonslayerz Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
yes catnip
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
-snatchs catnip-
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:iconmoonslayerz:
moonslayerz Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015
give it back
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
but...but!
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:iconutreable:
Utreable Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
SHE WANT THAT CANDY D!!!
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:icondeadkat21:
DeadKat21 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  New Deviant
*nosebleeds* oahahjekskdjdjjsh
The D oh gawd the D tastes like candy XD
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:iconscoutisbest2007:
ScoutIsBest2007 Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
LJ U ARE AWESOME
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:iconthelonewolf5000:
theLonewolf5000 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
uhhhhhhhh
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:iconshadowasch:
ShadowAsch Featured By Owner May 15, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*Blushing*
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:iconsesshomarul182:
Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015  Hobbyist
Candy~ I love Candy~
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:iconneightingale:
Neightingale Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Hobbyist
(When I see that I have to get in with him.Maki Blushing Icon)

(When his fingers start to run up my stomach and when he lifts up my shirt.Haruka Nanami (Shy and Blush) [V2])

(When he says that he will give me something else that tastes like candy.Rose blush)
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:iconloveanime767:
Loveanime767 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
:D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconneightingale:
Neightingale Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist
Best reactions ever, huh?
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:iconloveanime767:
Loveanime767 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015
Probably!
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:iconneightingale:
Neightingale Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist
Haha! Okay! xD
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:iconloveanime767:
Loveanime767 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015
Wink/Razz Wink/Razz Wink/Razz 
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:iconneightingale:
Neightingale Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist
XD
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:iconloveanime767:
Loveanime767 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
Meow :3 Meow :3 Meow :3 
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:iconmistpaw89:
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
* owl eyes * 
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:iconrallicrossoverh2:
RaLLiCrossoverH2 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015
Que the nosebleed!
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:iconarticunochick1993:
Articunochick1993 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
................................................................................. I want more
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:icongraceprime:
graceprime Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist
*perverted mode activeted* XD oh yummy~
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:iconriverso44797545:
RiverSo44797545 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
Please tell me he is not talking about what i am thinking...*right now i am like a cerry has a face*
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:iconzoe20042004:
zoe20042004 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
"ill give you somthing else that tastes like candy..." WTF!!!!
Medic's Rage Intensifies (Chat Icon) 
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:iconmichelthekiler2:
michelthekiler2 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Student Digital Artist
i wonder if slender was screaming like a little girl LOL!
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:iconpaintsoar125:
paintsoar125 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Student General Artist
Fan girl moments...
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:iconsaraann23:
saraann23 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
hahah love it hahahah
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:iconxkaitlynbear:
xKaitlynBear Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Student Photographer
Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart [F2U!] Mangle Icon 
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:iconavatarmell101:
AvatarMell101 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
After reading this i feel raped xc
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:icontransfangirl:
Transfangirl Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist
OH HELL YES!!!!!
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:icondarkstar1142:
Darkstar1142 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Student General Artist
1. I love transformers, so I love your name. 
2. I agree. I want to like to lick his lollypop. LOL! I'm bad!
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:icontransfangirl:
Transfangirl Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist
I just want to ride it!🍭
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:icondarkstar1142:
Darkstar1142 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student General Artist
Hm... Not a bad idea... I wonder if I'll start tasting like candy~?
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:icontherealmlpnyx:
Therealmlpnyx Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015
Actually it will taste like black licorice (I think I spelled that wrong)
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:iconneverlostneverfound:
neverlostneverfound Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhh!!! yes
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:iconkawiipopgirl:
kawiipopgirl Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
I WUV it
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:iconthe-luna:
the-luna Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014
:excited: yay!
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