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Laughing Jack X Reader 7 Minutes in Heaven

You searched for something interesting, something different. Avoiding all sharp and pointy objects. You grasped a rope, a worn one at that. Pulling it out, it stretched about a foot or two. Reaching the end a small bear had the roped tied in a noose around its neck, rainbow colored candies fell from its stomach. Splendor took a purple candy and popped it into his mouth.

"He always gives the best candy ________" Splendor sucked on the hard candy, holding the bear under you arm you unwrapped a lemon piece. A shrill laugh came from behind you as you placed the candy into your mouth. You turned sharply, muscles tense. A lanky your man stood with messy black hair, white and black fur on his shoulder, black a white striped sleeves covered his arms, a pair of dark grey over-alls and long striped socks. His skin was a glossy plastic white, black lips with dark rings around his eyes; he cocked his head to the side hair falling in his face.

"Hehaheheah" he cackled, his eye twitched. You nearly choked on the candy, it sliding back you automatically pushed it back up. His spiraled nose made you stare awkwardly at him. In a puff of black smoking he appeared next to you snatching the bear from your grasp.

"heheHahe" he ripped candy out of the bear and shoved at least 10 pieces of candy into him mouth spitting out wrappers. They all slowly floated down to the floor covered with saliva, in a matter of moments Slenderman flipped out screaming. Splendor gasped at his behavior, pushing you both into the closet.

"Remember to share!" Splendor called from the other side, he gave a gave a questioning cock of the head. A glint of mischief shined in his eyes, a piece of candy rolled in his tongue.

"Can you even talk?" you glared at him through through the darkness, he cackled causing your blood to begin to boil.

"Of course I can!" he laughed.

"Splendor wants me to share and share I shall~" his hands tightly wrapped around your neck pulling you closer. You tightened your lips together as did your jaw. You didn't want this guy to invade what little space you had between you.

"Sto-" as you opened you mouth a slimy tongue slipped in, you went to bite down only to bite a hard candy. It was your favorite flavor too which freaked you out. He pinned you against the wall, his thumbs pressing into the palm of you hands. Your fingers curled and tightened. His tongue and mouth tasted like pure sugar and candy, legs buckling you slumped against him lost in the rainbow of flavors.

"You wanna see a magic trick?!" his eye twitched and he let go of your hands, you tried to put them back to your sides. They wouldn't budge. Your hands were pinned as if nailed to the wall. You jolted forward only to be stopped by some freak force.

"What the hell!?" you screamed only to be silence by candy being shoved into your mouth, you kicked your legs wildly. His hands snaked under your shirt, tickling your soft bellie.  You laughed trying not to choke on the candies, he laughed with you. One thought entered your mind,'This guy gets off on laughter!!" you had a major what the hell moment. His finger trace down your stomach, squeezing you lips shut you surpressed laugher. When people tickled you it got out of control very fast.

"Your laugh sounds cute come on let me hear it" he chuckled, his eyes in the darkness bore into you. Pulling up your legs you blocked your ticklish zone. the candies in your mouth threatened to slip back into your throat.

"So you wanna play hard ball huh?" he let out an insane laugh, someone on the other side yelled " Taser her!". You tried to glare through the door and kill whoever said that. 2 hands pinched your sides, your muffled laughter reverberated the small space. You coughed swallowing the melted candy, your throat ached and burned. A dull burning pain in your legs forced them back down. He lifted your shirt, rolling it up to your breast. A pair of pursed lips pressed against your stomach. He blew directly in the middle of your stomach, the tingling feeling of laughter pulsed through you.

"Ahhahhahah!!" your shrill laugher made him smile, the tingling of being tickled spread down to your nethers. Arms still pulling against the force that bound you against the wall. Every laugh and giggle you grew wetter, your lungs ached, a cramp in your middle.

"Ah..Ha..ow" you groaned the pain becoming to great to continue to laugh. Taking in deep breathes you calmed your shaking body. Laughing Jack stood and eye level with youm jagged tooth smile on his face.

"What a pretty laugh" he whispered poking your stomach a few times, each time your abdomen contracted painfully. Your face is red your breathing heavy and labored.

"________,Jack times up. Don't want you making her laugh herself to death" Jack replaced his hands over your hands in that pressured place, the door creaked open as you were released. Rubbing your palms,everything vanished in a black mist. You fell onto a soft bed, creepy and horrifying clown posters covered the walls. The bed sheets were terrifying having a large clown head with blood dripping from its teeth printed on it.

"Where am I!?" you yelled, Jack appeared kneeling over you.

"I'll give you something else that tastes like candy~" he smirked.
No one guessed this dude! if you would have red his creepypasta you guys would've been all over it.
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:iconcatcrazy200:
catcrazy200 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Digital Artist
lj: i'll give you something else that tastes like candy~

me: I have a very dirty mind....
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BionicFemme Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2016
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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RavenIsRigby Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Be funny if LJ's penis was just a lollipop, or a chocolate covered banana. Lol.
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:iconderpy-jeff-fangirl:
derpy-jeff-fangirl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016  Student General Artist
XD
OH GOD THE IMAGES
WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME?!
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:iconravenisrigby:
RavenIsRigby Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I am sorry ouo...?
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:iconderpy-jeff-fangirl:
derpy-jeff-fangirl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016  Student General Artist
;-;
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:iconmedusa121:
medusa121 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015
That ending.
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:iconkaylanie:
kaylanie Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2015
Man I have a very dirty mind
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:iconapollosmoon:
Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Edited Nov 25, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
(/`~`)/ *going into freak out mode* "FLIP ALL THE TABLES BITCHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" get rekt lj
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:iconderpy-jeff-fangirl:
derpy-jeff-fangirl Featured By Owner Edited Jan 8, 2016  Student General Artist
Sæm
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:iconapollosmoon:
Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
Bill cipher party hardcore Bill cipher party hardcore Bill cipher party hardcore Bill cipher party hardcore Bill cipher party hardcore Bill cipher party hardcore Bill cipher party hardcore Bill cipher party hardcore Bill cipher party hardcore  GET RECK
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:iconderpy-jeff-fangirl:
derpy-jeff-fangirl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016  Student General Artist
XD
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Cinderblockderp Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2015
Dat ending doe...
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:iconvixenix:
Vixenix Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015
I was just bout to say dat...
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:iconcinderblockderp:
Cinderblockderp Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015
Something else that tastes like candy? A PINEAPPLE. 🍍
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:iconderpy-jeff-fangirl:
derpy-jeff-fangirl Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016  Student General Artist
Pineapples pineapples flying in the sky
-mary
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:iconvixenix:
Vixenix Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015
XD XD XD XD I got weak as a mother'!"
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:iconn-i-k-z-n-e-i-l-l:
N-i-k-z-n-e-i-l-l Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2015  Student Digital Artist
 wait what XD
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Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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BloodyAngelove Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015  Student Artist
no to be  mean but 

lanky your man stood with
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AaliyahElvira Featured By Owner Edited Oct 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
"I'll give you something else that tastes like candy~"
Me: OHKYA, WOA-KAY, OK (I actually screamed this)
also, you don't want me near a dick that tastes like candy
after sucking a while, I always bite my candy, SOO…
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Oh god, the way that can be taken...fuck my head...
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:iconaaliyahelvira:
AaliyahElvira Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
>;3
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
x3
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:iconvixenix:
Vixenix Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015
Goteem....
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:iconaaliyahelvira:
AaliyahElvira Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:^)
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Sesshomarul182 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Poor L.J. :o
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:iconaaliyahelvira:
AaliyahElvira Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yea, he'd need to watch out
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MissLittleSilvia Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"I'll give you something else that tastes like candy~" he smirked.
nigga put away your tiny ass penis okay
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
omfg, you made my day.
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:iconmisslittlesilvia:
MissLittleSilvia Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad I did :>
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
:3
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:iconvixenix:
Vixenix Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015
HA! 
GOTTEEEM!
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:iconbarkmist:
Barkmist Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XD That made my day.
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:iconmisslittlesilvia:
MissLittleSilvia Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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satiricScythe Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
His dick is the size of a tictac, and all he wants to do is freshen your breath.
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:iconapollosmoon:
Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
How the frig do you know that? Did you..............
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satiricScythe Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
....shhhhhhh *slides backwards out of the room without moving my feet*

lmao nah jeff told me
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Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
Jeff............how does he know?????
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satiricScythe Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Good question.
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Clouisery Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
FINALLY! A 7MiH where his item isn't JUST a piece of candy. Some creativity from the author!

clap clap Clap Happy Clap Epic clap joker clap... And a dancing Godzilla, just because Godzilla - KinGoji [Excited, Clapping] [V.1].
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meisterkiyomi Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2015
djkashfsadjfdsjfhuidsgafiskjfhsajihfi  if the D taste liek candy i want it!!    xD
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i-have-no-life-123 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehehe cake? hahahahahah
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WeirdRainbowLemons Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ha! I love that ending... XD though...
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CreepySpark Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015
Fuck yeah!
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wakalover2 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Student General Artist
:iconoooohplz: LOLLIPOPS- //trips and falls down some stairs
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deadlyrose12345 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015
Innocence: What else taste like candy?
Me:; -comes in and grabs LJ's ear and drahs him out and gives him a stern talking You ruin her innocents and I will kill you slowly with your own candy. -growls-
LJ: Compesh.
Me:-throws him back into the room- Have fun~! -smiles happily and skips away
InnocEnce:-confused greatly-


Me: Poor sis. -shakes head I am too protective.
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Kittandragon Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*laughing i teleport in and drops a Lollipop (an ACTUAL one) onto Innocence's lap*
You dont wish to know my dream.
*glares at Lj and mouths 'You ruin her and i will kill you in more ways than should be possible, understood?'*
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EmmaOfAllTrades Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015
Anti-Freeze, its anti-freeze....Don't put it in your mouth....
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TwiilightBen Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I would be the innocence lol. i still dont know what the "other thing that tastes like candy" is plz dont tell me if it kills innocence then i dont wanna know
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