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Poor Girl

She is one who lives with fake smiles and cheer
And is the one with no one dear.
Although to all she wise beyond her years
It is herself she truely fears
With a horrid face she sees herself
And someone that all could live without
Useless, Ugly,Broken and Shamed
It is only she to be blamed
Poor girl will never see the truth
For she is still in her youth
She watches the world pass by
With blue empty eyes
Inside she rots from the inside out
Just waiting for the day when she will give out
Most others do not see through her mask
Fake friends find this to much of a task
Only to be used and thrown out
She will simply go without
Her ambitions trampled
Her happiness in shambles
To her mind she runs
to escape everyone
In her own world she is at peace
Until all her life functions cease.
Got really depressed wrote out feelings, probably failed at the rhyming and being a poet. Who do you want next for 7MIH?
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:iconpixelchic978:
PixelChic978 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  New member Hobbyist
yes. me. yes. all the time.
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farahaniyah2001 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
it might happen or begin with your friend ...but mine begin with my mom she used to be in a mental hospital and beat me shitless tannabi avvie eye blink n cry 
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DarkLink176 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My life...... God damnit i'm tired of this shit ;-;
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:iconmemowkitty:
memowkitty Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It will be all good man -w-
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DarkLink176 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:P
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:iconmariofanfiction:
MarioFanfiction Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My life. This is just my life.
i love you.............JK
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:iconbloodypie1243:
Bloodypie1243 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Story of my life
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:iconakakyoak:
Akakyoak Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, this was beautiful!
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AweSauceLiz Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Oh my god... That was beautiful!
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XxWolfRocksxX Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think this is beautiful, you did a really good job on the rhyming if you asked me.
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:iconlastofthewolves:
LastoftheWolves Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you spying on me? XD
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:iconmemowkitty:
memowkitty Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yesnomaybe e3e
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LastoftheWolves Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha!
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BloodyMetalAlchmist Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Story of BloodyMetalAlchmist >:3 im evil hearted for reals
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BloodyMetalAlchmist Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I loved it x3

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Hirie-nee-chan Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student General Artist
To be honest, I think you hit home with a lot of girls, myself include. It's absolutely fabulous. This poem is not to long and winding, but not to blunt either. There's a saying that this reminds me of. ^_^

"Art should comfort the disturbed, and disturb the comfortable." --Cezar Cruz 

You've accomplished just that.
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KittyDead Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...There's not much to say. You hit it right on the nail so perfectly... that's what I'm going through. Nice poem.
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RM21300 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
That's so sad, deep and poetic. (I think I spelled that wrong)
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suzeeQ Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
:'c please get better soon memow. You're a great writer. And to tell you the truth.. I get that feeling more than once in a while. Sometimes I get these horrible thoughts of..getting one of the kitchen knives and.. Well you know. T.T
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Amu-Amateur Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i understand the feeling of this.. sadly, I am the one person who hides her sadness with fake smiles. No one even pays attention to my sadness. No one even cares.
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SoftShoe Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist

I feel like this constantly i'm just not ever able to put it down as well as you did

 

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JustGoToS1eep Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
This was....so relatable. I know how it feels.
Just stay strong. <3 I hope you feel better.
:iconhuggleplz: 
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AxelXenaMoon Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional General Artist

You just wrote about me practically.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Only I have green eyes. Leaf green eyes

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:iconkuratha:
kuratha Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Pokemon leaf green eyes?
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:iconaxelxenamoon:
AxelXenaMoon Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Professional General Artist
My eyes are the color of tree leaves.
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HurpaDerpaTheKiller Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stay strong, Memow! We all get depressed. Including me, I've tried to end it all once. Keep standing tall. Hug Heart 
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Lord-kitty-sho Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist
the rake
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AScarletmoon17 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The story of my life.
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MagikarPWN Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Writer
Me all the time when I'm not drawing or writing.
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Anime-Greek Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're not the only one, bro ;^;Hug
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Redanimecat Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Artist
Actually, Since I always get depressed and know too much on how it feels I write some poems and stories on sadness and other stuff. Now that I think of it I did that for an assignment in english class. Since it was the end of the school year my teacher wanted to do something fun so she decided to do a poem activity. She said to write about 5 or 4 poems(I forgot) about; food, imagery, feeling (5 senses), descriptive, and emotion. Yeah, I did every single one on; depression, insanity, and mystery. Except the food one.(picky eater right here) I regret putting so much emotion in those poems because it looks like I'm having some awful experiences and I might be a lunatic. (<- XD Don't know if misspelled) Though, that did help me pass the class. (I got like a B on it or something) Anyway, yeah The lesson that can be learned from this is: that I can write some creepy stuff and don't get too depressed or sad while writing a peom. 
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memowkitty Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was crying while writing this
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LittleLucyx3 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is it weird that I started crying after reading this? :'c
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KopyTheGhost Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Humanized Mr. Widemouth, he's my favorite monster
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TwinkleTehFoX Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*sigh* I feel your pain..last night I cried myself to sleep and that is not pleasant. 
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:iconmemowkitty:
memowkitty Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Same here, I do that sometimes too.
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TwinkleTehFoX Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:hug: it's the worst feeling :(
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AngelicalSweetie Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A poem doesn't have to rhyme for the meaning to be understood. This poem really speaks to me, because I know I feel this way sometimes, as well. I hope you feel better, and know that you have many friends on here that care.
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:iconmemowkitty:
memowkitty Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am feeling better, it's just really hard :(

 

 

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AngelicalSweetie Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It can be. But we're here for you, when ever you need to vent or anything. :)
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TheEscape5657 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsadhugplz: I know that feel
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:iconmemowkitty:
memowkitty Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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rainbowdashie19 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Artist
I feel your pain bro5 seconds hug 
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:iconmemowkitty:
memowkitty Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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rainbowdashie19 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Artist
5 seconds hug 
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SuperDarkSonic47 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Artist
This is so depressing. =( ❤❤
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:iconmemowkitty:
memowkitty Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeaaah .-.
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:iconleakittychan:
leakittychan Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
you're not the only one feeling like that, I hope you felt better after writing this out <3
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:iconmemowkitty:
memowkitty Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I did :)
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:iconleakittychan:
leakittychan Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
I'm glad <3
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